我要表达的意思是:她他犹豫了一会儿,并没有和我要电话号码,但很快她就后悔了,因为她晚上真的很想见见我.shehesitatedforamomentandshedidn'taskformyphonenumber,butshewassorryaboutitinamoment,f

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我要表达的意思是:她他犹豫了一会儿,并没有和我要电话号码,但很快她就后悔了,因为她晚上真的很想见见我.
she hesitated for a moment and she didn't ask for my phone number,
but she was sorry about it in a moment ,for she really want to see me at night .
帮我看看我造的句,有没有错,名子本身可以可以更简练,有没有更加地道的说法.我这个肯定是有点中国式的英语.
另外最后面用at night肯定不对劲,应该是 当晚上时,她想见我.
另祝大家新年好运!

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she hesitated for a moment ＂but" she didn't ask for my phone number,
And soon she regretted for not asking his phone number because she just really want to see me tonight
觉得好我话捧一下埸吧