英语写给接待家庭的信自己写的很糟糕求修改可以发挥主要是将我的语法等错误跟正DearSirorMadam:Howareyoudoing,Ihopeeverythingisbeinggood.IamWangwhojoinedtheprogramandwillgotoAmericainafewmo

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英语写给接待家庭的信 自己写的很糟糕求修改 可以发挥 主要是将我的语法等错误跟正
Dear Sir or Madam:
How are you doing,I hope everything is being good .I am Wang who joined the
program and will go to America in a few months,Im so excited.
I am a lively tradional Chinese girl .My home town Nanjing a beautiful ancient
city that will hold the 2nd Youth Olympic Games.My family consist of my
father my mother and I and we lived together happily.My parents and I are very
peaceful and friendly .We love each other.And I am a senior high school student.
I have many friends we love watching films sometimes we go to the cinema at the
weekend.I enjoy singing ,much more listening to music.I also enjoy sharing
music with others and singing with others.Sometimes I think listen to music is a
good way to relax myself.I like calligraphy and I have learn it for many years.I
love watching Animation and I like cosplay my friends also like it .At that time,I want
to improve my spoken English .I also want to learn the culture of America.In my
opinion the America mainland is magical and a symbol of freedom.I take part in
this activities to close to the local Americans I wish to learn some special qualities
from the Americans.I love traveling and reading books.In my spare time,my
family always take me to travel around in China and this time they are very glad to
support me to join this program to go and see the world.This is a great chance for
me to make friends and learn English,I appreciate your help .I look for forward to
take some outdoor activities with the scenery.I’m looking forward to see you
soon.
Yours
Wang
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Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam:
Hello!
Im Wang,the girl will go to America after few months who participated the program,and i'm so exciting.
Now let me do a self-introduction in here.I'm a traditional Chinese girl.
I living with my parents,my dady and mami.We living in NanJing which is a beautiful and ancient city.Nanjing will hold the 2nd Youth Olympic Games.
We living very happy,dady and mami are peaceful and friendly,of course so do i. And we love with each other.
I am a senior high school student and i make a lots friend.We like watch
films,we often go to the cinema at the weekend.I enjoying sing,and i like
listen the music.And share those musics to the others,and singing. Because
i think listen music is a good way to relax myself.And i like calligraphy
with many years working on it.And i like cartoon even sometimes i and my
friends will take cosplay.
I want to improve my oral level ,want to study the culture of America.
In my opinion,America is full with magical and symbolize the freedom.
So i participate the program to get close the native American ,i want to
get some special qualities from Americans.
I also like travel and reading books.My parents will take me travel around
in China when they were free.They are support me to join this program
to open my mind.
Its a great chance for me to view the exotic views,i think i can make many
firends in there and learn English in America.
I appreciate your help,I'm expecting the outdoor activities to view scenery.
Also,im expecting to see you in soon time.
Sincerely
Wang
好好享受你的旅行,在这里能做的就是给你纠正一下了.加油,小姑娘.
以后要记住,写作的时候要分段,开写的时候尽量罗列下提纲就像写语文作文一样.一个段落一个段落的清晰罗列,不要想起什么就写什么.不要问大哥哥为什么英语好,因为付出了.