假定你是李华，向在你校学习的美国交换生Adam借了一本英文小说，但不慎丢失，一时又买不到。请给他写电子邮件，说明情况。要点包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明物品丢失的经过；3

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假定你是李华，向在你校学习的美国交换生Adam借了一本英文小说，但不慎丢失，一时又买不到。请给他写电子邮件，说明情况。要点包括：

1. 表示歉意；

2. 说明物品丢失的经过；

3. 提出可能的解决方案。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Adam

 

 

 

 

Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Adam

I'm deeply sorry but I have to let you know that I lost the English novel Gone with the Wind which I borrowed from you a month ago. I like it so much that I took it with me wherever I went. Unfortunately the other day during a trip to Beijing I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag. I'm so sorry as I know the novel was a birthday present from your father. 

Hard as I tried I was not able to find the novel in any bookstore here. I wonder if you would like to take the Chinese-English version which will hopefully help improve your Chinese.

Looking forward to your reply.

                            Yours

                             Li Hua

分 析：
考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体 故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语borrow sth from 从哪借；in a hurry 匆忙地；help sb do sth帮某人做某事；I like it so much that I took it with me wherever I went.这个句子中运用wherever引导的让步状语从句；Unfortunately the other day during a trip to Beijing I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag这个句子中运用到such ..that ..如此以致于；Hard as I tried I was not able to find the novel in any bookstore here这个句子运用as引导的倒装句，表示虽然；

考点：
提纲类作文