英语好的朋友请进!这样翻译对吗,那些句子有问题?原文：各位同学,欢快的联欢会就要结束了.让我们随着这首歌,告别2012,迎来2013.祝大家在新的一年里生活高高兴兴、家庭幸福美满,同时祝大

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英语好的朋友请进!这样翻译对吗,那些句子有问题?
原文：
各位同学,欢快的联欢会就要结束了.让我们随着这首歌,告别2012,迎来2013.祝大家在新的一年里生活高高兴兴、家庭幸福美满,同时祝大家学习越来越好.亲爱的同学们、敬爱的老师们,再见
译文：Dear students, happy get together will come to an end. Let us with this song, say goodbye to the 2012, have 2013. I wish you all in the new year to have fun, family happiness, at the same time, I wish everyone to learn and become better and better. Dear classmates, my dear teachers, good bye!

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Dear all

our exciting party comes to an end.Let us farewell 2012 and welcome 2013 to this song.
Wish everyone can be happy in life and enjoy family happiness and study getting better and better
Dear classmates, my dear teachers, good bye!

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