二十分、代写英语作文假如你是李明,学校领导和老师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站,关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能,你们感到很难过,请你给校长写一封信,劝说校长同意开通教室内的

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二十分、代写英语作文
假如你是李明,学校领导和老师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站,关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能,你们感到很难过,请你给校长写一封信,劝说校长同意开通教室内的网络.
注意：
1、信中要包括下表中的所有内容：
2、词数：120左右；
3、信的开关和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数.
4、参考词汇：sense of judgment(判断力)
事由：教室内的电脑不能上网,建议学校开通网络.
原因；
1、有利于查找资料；
2、浏览新闻,了解信息
3、作为高中生,我们正在形成自己的判断力.
Dear Headmaster.
I'm writing to persuade you to let us surf the lnternet in the classroom .
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
本人要求：①我是菜鸟、最好用初中水平
②加几处语病

Answer 1

Dear principal.
I'm writing to persuade you, let us in the classroom lnternet surfing.
I know, I know, because you don't worry about our health, browse web site affected, just closed the classroom within the network browsing. But, you should be able to think of, as high school students, we have formed their own judgment, and won't be bad information induction. In addition, because homework is busy, browse the Internet has become our only contact with the outside world, browse news channel, find out information, and find information, all must depend on it. So, I really hope, you can open network, let us these was tied to the desks of the students can sense the information society.
Looking forward to your reply.
You,
Li Ming
抱歉,我是小学生,只能写到这个水平