这段英文有什么语法错误吗?Iaskedyouifyouwentwithme.（我问你你是否愿意和我走?）Youanwseredthati'drathernot.(你回答我不愿意.）Iwassad(我伤心.）Whenyourepeatone,icried.youwentalone.（当你重

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这段英文有什么语法错误吗?
I asked you if you went with me.（我问你 你是否愿意和我走?）
You anwsered that i'd rather not.(你回答 我不愿意.）
I was sad(我伤心.）
When you repeat one,i cried.you went alone.（当你重复那句话,我哭了,你单独走了.）
Nobody told me something about hurt,i forgot what smile was.(没有人告诉我关于受伤的一些事情,我忘记了什么是微笑.）
However he was sing to me.and played a joke on me,include her.(然而他给我唱歌,还有对我开玩笑,包括她.）
I’d love to follow him.i am calling for love now,i am thinking about things of mine.（我愿意跟随他.我正在召唤爱,我正在考虑我的事情.）
I’ll go with him the minute he gets back.（他一回来我就将要和他走.）
I wish we will happy.（我祝愿我们将要快乐.）
这段英文是我自己写出来的,如果有什么错误,希望大家帮我纠正!

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i asked you whether you would like to go with me.（我问你 你是否愿意和我走?）
You anwsered that you would not like to.(你回答 我不愿意.）后面用i 的话必须要有标点符号“”
I felt sad(我感到伤心.）
When you repeated what you had said,I burst into tears.but still you went alone.（当你重复那句话,我哭了,你单独走了.）
Nobody told me anything about being hurt,I forgot what smile was.(没有人告诉我关于受伤的一些事情,我忘记了什么是微笑.）
However he sang to me.and played jokes on me,including her.(然而他给我唱歌,还有对我开玩笑,包括她.） 这句话的意思没太懂,表达的有些模糊
I’d love to follow him.I am calling love now and I am thinking about things of my own.（我愿意跟随他.我正在召唤爱,我正在考虑我的事情.）
I’ll go with him as soon as he gets back.（他一回来我就将要和他走.）
I wish we will be happy.(我祝愿我们将要快乐.）这里不能用would,因为前面是wish.如果用would 的话前面需用wished.这样的话就是过去的意愿而不是表示将来了.
best wishes!