考研12年大作文,帮我看看能得几分我是套的模板写的.题目是一副图片,上面两个人看着一个撒了的牛奶.一个人说全完了,另一个人说幸好还剩下点.Attitudedoesexertsuchaprofoundeffectonourlifethat

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考研12年大作文,帮我看看能得几分
我是套的模板写的.题目是一副图片,上面两个人看着一个撒了的牛奶.一个人说全完了,另一个人说幸好还剩下点.
Attitude does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizesthe way of people’s living and thinking.As is subtly revealed in the portrayalthere is two different attitudes to the spilled milk.What a meaningful picture.
The thought-provoking drawing amirror a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the differentattitude will pay you different live experience.Of all the ingredients ofsuccess,good attitude seems to be the first within our control.Good attitudecan broaden our horizon,enlarge our scope of knowledge and enrich ourspiritual civilization.But the goal of achieving aharmonious society may fall through under the negative influence of badattitude.Bad attitude bring great loss to both the individual and the wholesociety and kill a great mass of time.That is to say,if you have a goodattitude you have a wonderful live experience.
I admit a belief that stuffthat happened themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot fromstuff if we take a good attitude for them.Only by enforcing these measure intopractice,can our society be more harmonious,our economy be more prosperous,and we,as individuals,embrace more promising perspective.

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15分吧,写的还是很不错的,又很多出彩的地方,只是最后一句,can前面那个逗号感觉有点争议,