英语小帮忙啊.我的爱好,老师要我们上讲台讲.helloeveryonemynameisxxx..Ihavemanyhobbies,SuchasIlilkeplayingbasketballlisteningtomusicandeditsomeVideoNext,IbringyouoneofmyeditvideoSo,thisismyhobby,an

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英语小帮忙啊.
我的爱好,老师要我们上讲台讲.
hello everyone my name is xxx..I have many hobbies,Such as I lilke playing basketball listening to music and edit some Video
Next, I bring you one of my edit video
So, this is my hobby, and I hope everyone of us can enjoy his own hobby, enjoy the simple, good things of life.
结束.
有没有什么问题

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hello everyone . my name is xxx..I have many hobbies, Such as ---后接名词. I playing basketball listening to music and editting some Video
Next----用and then 会更口语化点, I bring----will show you one of my edit video --es（复数）
So, this is my hobby, and I hope everyone of us----多余 can ------could enjoy his own hobby, enjoy the simple, good things of life.
——————————————————建议这句都不要.
——————————直接So, this is my hobby ,、.thanks for listening,that's all