oncetherelivedaboywasveryfondofreading.buthewaspoor.sohehadtoborrowthemfromarichmanlivedfaraway.在boy后加who；man后加who请问能不能把was删去,用veryfondofreading做定语?能不能把lived改成living?

Question

once there lived a boy was very fond of reading.but he was poor.so he had to borrow them from a rich man lived far away.
在boy后加who；man后加 who
请问能不能把was删去,用very fond of reading 做定语?
能不能把lived改成living?

Answer 1

不去去掉was,没用动词了 be fond of 固定搭配
第二个可以