高人救命啊!请改我的英文文章Respectleader:IamZhiWeiLi.IwasaworkerinArmourElementarySchool.Iworkedinthereabouthalfyear,eachdayIwasveryenthusiastictowork.BecausemyEnglishlimited,perhapsIbringalottroub

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高人救命啊! 请改我的英文文章
Respect leader:
I am Zhi Wei Li. I was a worker in Armour Elementary School. I worked in there about half year, each day I was very enthusiastic to work. Because my English limited, perhaps I bring a lot troubles to our school. I have something want to reflect to you. Since, XXXX Year XX Day, my department boss told me to have a sick day. After sick day, she told me that she will teach me English, if I pay money to her. (Somebody was presence of a third party).
Second, I want to reflect was my department boss sometimes after smoking, and she didn’t wear gloves, then she touched on the food that served to the children. When I saw she to do, at the same time I said: “That was not health. Sometimes, the cafeteria revived many foods, and then the boss told me to move them. I asked: “Where should I put them to? Then she told me: “I don't know, neither”.
Until October, 22, 2007, my boss said: “Zhi Wei Li, can you apply for another school to work?” Now I don't know what I should do. Please solve the problem for me, Leaderships. But I am pleasure to work in Armour Elementary School, and I will try my best to improve my English.
Thank you so much to read to letter,
Armour Elementary School Worker,
Zhi Wei Li

Answer 1

第一句用i am a worker,后面是I went to work there about half one year ago.把each day改为every day.i am very enthusiastic on working .Because改为as.limited用limit.
a lot of troubles
i have something wanting to reflect to you.
since去掉,on XXXday,XXyear.
After the sick day
second,which i want to refect is ----
when she hasn't worn gloves,then去掉.always touch the food,on去掉
that are served to the children
When I saw she do this
the same time I would said
That was not health改为it isn't healthy.
many food,food不可数,这里要用引号.
I don't know,either.
on October,22,2007
Thank you so much for reading the letter,
给我额外加分好不拉