英语翻译Good afternoon(or morning),my name is ...,glad to meet you.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview,and i hope i can make a good performance today.Now i will introduce myself briefly,I am 22 years old,born in ..

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英语翻译
Good afternoon(or morning),my name is ...,glad to meet you.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview,and i hope i can make a good performance today.
Now i will introduce myself briefly,I am 22 years old,born in ...and i graduated from ...university,my major is International Logistics.I feel i am hardworking responsible and diligent in any project i undertake.I believe i am quite suitable for this job.If we can work together.I think it would be very happy.
面试的时候这样说不够口语化吗?

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翻译：下午好（早上好）,我的名字是．．,很高兴见到你．很荣幸能有这个面试的机会,希望今天我能表现得很好．
现在我简洁的介绍一下自己,我22岁,在．．出生,我从.大学毕业,我修的专业是国际物流.我觉得我是一个在任何项目上都努力工作,负责人,认真的人.我相信我很适合这份工作（这个职位）.如果我们能一起工作,我想它会很高兴.－最后一句话有问题.
语法纠正：for an interview
you cannot make a good performance - it should be " i hope i will perform well today" or "i hope i will make a good impression"
I think it would be very happy should be changed to " i think working together with me will be a pleasant experience"
my major is...这样的说法完全没有问题．