AllmentionedabovemirroredmyskillssuchasarelativelysolidfoundationofEnglish,arelativelystrongabilityofsummary,analysis,criticalthinking.请问这句话有语病吗?

Question

All mentioned above mirrored my skills such as a relatively solid foundation of English,
a relatively strong ability of summary,analysis,critical thinking.请问这句话有语病吗?

Answer 1

前面没有问题,句型也可以.但是建议把summary——形容词改成comprehensive——名词,综合的能力.只看出这些问题…………