请专业人士改错20100801欢迎大家严厉地批评.若能指正错误缺点,Inrecentyears,abortionhasbecomeacommonthingsacceptedbymanypeople.However,otherpeoplebelieveabortionisanabnormalandabsurdbehavior.Whydotheythinks

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请专业人士改错20100801
欢迎大家严厉地批评.若能指正错误缺点,
In recent years,abortion has become a common things accepted by many people.
However,other people believe abortion is an abnormal and absurd behavior.
Why do they think so?
For one thing that they consider it’s illegal to kill a fetus because fetus is also a real life like us.
As we oughtn’t to abuse children,can we kill them?
But it’s still an argue in academic circles.
And for another,the main reason in some countries,which is a bit abstract,is people’s belief.
You know,in history of America,Christian and Catholic had marched massively in public when government abolished the ban against abortion.
As we all know that he will be absent for this meeting,his attending is really abrupt.

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In recent years,abortion has become a common things accepted by many people.【去掉a.】
However,other people believe abortion is an abnormal and absurd behavior.
Why do they think so?【they指代不清,是支持的人还是反对的人?可改为：why do anti-abortion advocates think this behavior is wrong?】
For one thing that they consider it’s illegal to kill a fetus because fetus is also a real life like us.【For one thing, they……】
As we oughtn’t to abuse children,can we kill them?【Even we cannot abuse children, can we kill fetus?abortion杀的不是children.】
But it’s still an argue in academic circles.【……still a controversial issue in academic field.】
And for another,the main reason in some countries,which is a bit abstract,is people’s belief.【For antother thing,the main reason of anti-abortion in some ……people's religion.belief太宽泛,真正原因是religion.】
You know,in history of America,Christian and Catholic had marched massively in public when government abolished the ban against abortion.【本文看似是academic writing,在正式写作中不用口语化的东西,you know.】【in the history of 和in history不同,此处用前者.abolished the law which was against abortion】

As we all know that he will be absent for this meeting,his attending is really abrupt.【abrupt用在此处不当,可改为unexpected.】