英文邮件,求语法挑错,修改词汇I'mabigfanofXXXfromChina.Icametoknowaboutyourin2012.InthePV,ithinkthatyouaresopretty,andespeciallycool!IlikeyouandXXXverymuch.Becauseofthemyjapaneseisverypoorsoican'te

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英文邮件,求语法挑错,修改词汇
I'm a big fan of XXX from China.I came to know about your in 2012.
In the PV,i think that you are so pretty,and especially cool!I like you and XXX very much.
Because of the my japanese is very poor so i can't express very well my total support and adoration for you .
I wishyour could do better and better in the future and i'm will alway be your biggist fan who pays attention to what you do all the time.
i sincerely hope that you can write me back.i will be waiting for you.

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I'm a big fan of XXX from China.I came to know about your in 2012.（your-you)
In the PV,i think that you are so pretty,and especially cool!I like you and XXX very much.  (此句不通顺,用so ...that可能改善点）

Because of the my japanese is very poor so i can't express very well my total support and adoration for you .( because 与so 不能连用,二者必须删除一个；because of 后面跟的是短语,because 后面才是跟句子的；japanese首字母大写；老外最不喜欢中国人说自己语言poor）

I wish your could do better and better in the future and i'm will alway be your biggist fan who pays attention to what you do all the time.(第一个your-you; i'm-I; alway-always; biggist-biggest)


i sincerely hope that you can write me back.i will be waiting for you.(期待某人的来信习惯用looking forward to hearing from you.)
其实我建议你重写,文章很别扭.