作文求修改自古以来,梅作为花中四君子之首,一向便是顽强、圣洁的象征.今日,我便有幸观赏了冬梅傲雪的美景.一日我方推开门,便被一股冷风吹得打寒颤.我被眼前的景象惊呆了：寒风怒号,

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作文求修改
自古以来,梅作为花中四君子之首,一向便是顽强、圣洁的象征.今日,我便有幸观赏了冬梅傲雪的美景.
一日我方推开门,便被一股冷风吹得打寒颤.我被眼前的景象惊呆了：寒风怒号,大雪纷飞,地白风色寒,雪花大如手.“什么鬼天气!”我耐不住严寒,准备回家做缩头乌鬼.
方迈进楼门,我便怔住了.刚才对门外白雪的一望,不经意间发现了一团如火的红.在这寒冬腊月,那是什么呢?在好奇心的驱使下,我走了过去.
近看才发现,原来是一簇在寒风凛冽中怒放的红梅.若说梅花的外表,不过是五个再朴素不过的粉红花瓣.跟本不能与春天娇艳的百花相题并论.然而,在这万里雪飘寒冬的映衬下,她是那样的红,那样的艳!能有哪朵花和梅花一样不畏风雪,不畏严寒的怒放!
渐渐的,雪下得更紧了,风刮得更大了,正如李白的诗句：“燕上雪花大如席,纷纷吹落轩辕台”.我冷得不行,慌忙将衣服系紧.那一簇红梅,被风吹得东摇西摆,被雪打得左右剞斜.周围的其它花木剩下的枯叶残花纷纷凌落,梅,却安然不动,依旧努力装点这除了白色一无所有的世界,如同寒风中永不熄来的火炬.
过了许久,雪停了,环顾四周,世界被白色所笼罩.那朵红梅的花包里也浸满了雪.然而,梅花并没有被寒风、暴雪所打倒.在一片雪白当中,梅花依旧怒放,显得更加美丽,更加不屈,更加坚韧.没错,这正是我中华民族的民魂啊!
梅花,你虽不似牡丹那般国色天香,不似月季那般妖艳浮华,不似荷花那般高贵典雅,却拥有傲霜斗雪,坚贞不屈,不屈不挠的大无畏精神!
梅花,我中华的国花!

Answer 1

Great changes have been taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies.
In the past our teachers explained the langeuage points,we listened and took notes,we didn't have time to think about questions.And we had to do had do plenty of homework after class even we don't have much time.
But now our teachers show questions then we discuss them and learn to study with classmates,finding out the solutions to the problems.So after class we can have many kinds of activites .For example going to the library reading books,surfing the Internel to serach helphul information and so on .I think the explorning learning strategives is very good