请问这句英语可以这样改不?She asked if I would spend an hour a week with a young man ,help him to do his homework 可以改成She asked if I would spend an hour with a young,help him to do his homework every week

Question

请问这句英语可以这样改不?
She asked if I would spend an hour a week with a young man ,help him to do his homework 可以改成She asked if I would spend an hour with a young,help him to do his homework every week

Answer 1

不可以,不符合语言表达习惯. 第一句是：她问我是否愿意每周花一小时,陪一个年轻人帮他做家庭作业. 如果按你改的句子,只可翻译为：她问我是否愿意花一小时陪一个年轻人,每周帮他做家庭作业.
你觉得是否别扭?
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