谁能帮我修改一下英文简历~急用~Iamanhonest,trustworthyandaresponsiblegirl.IgraduatedfromShanghaiUniversityandhavesuccessfullycompletedcoursesineachsemesterandscholarships.Iamalsoindependentandhaveagoodcommuni

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谁能帮我修改一下英文简历~急用~
I am an honest,trustworthy and a responsible girl.I graduated from Shanghai University and have successfully completed courses in each semester and scholarships.I am also independent and have a good communication skill.In my daily time,I love singing,music and travelling,etc.I am willing to work under pressure with leardership quality.I will not be afraid of hard work that will make me more sedulous and involve into society.Like to use you identify the talents,explore my life journey!

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I am an honest,trustworthy and responsible person.I graduated from Shanghai University and received scholarship in each semester.I have a good personality,good social skills and some leadership qualities.In my spare time,I love to sing,listen to music and travel.I am good at working under pressure,I am not afraid of the challenges my work will bring me because they will only help me to work harder.I would like to have the opportunity to work for you and have the chance to experience a new journey in my life!
我改得非常口语化,只是在你写的基础上把意思表达方式改了一点,没有添加或去除什么,希望能帮上你一点忙