英语翻译请填写您的基本信息并选择谘询内容,我们将尽快与您联系.Pleasefilloutthisformandchoosethecontentsyouwanttoask.Wewillcontectyouasquicklyaswecan.*为必填项.为了给您更具体的答覆,*以外

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英语翻译
请填写您的基本信息并选择谘询内容,我们将尽快与您联系.
Please fill out this form and choose the contents you want to ask.We will contect you as quickly as we can.
*为必填项.为了给您更具体的答覆,*以外的项目也请详细填写,感谢您的配合.
* is must writing..As the item except *,please fill out amply,so we can answer more amply for you,thank you.
请问以上的翻译对吗?

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请填写您的基本信息并选择谘询内容,我们将尽快与您联系.
Please fill out this form and choose the contents you want to ask.We will contect you as quickly as we can.
1.fill out 改成→fill in
2.漏了翻译“基本信息”
3.一般这种文体要求正式,所以会避免说we,I 等主语和从句choose the contents you want to ask,尽量用其他的短语表达,或者用被动语态.
如果是我翻译的话：Please fill in this form with your personal information and enquiry,we will contact you as soon as possible.
*为必填项.为了给您更具体的答覆,*以外的项目也请详细填写,感谢您的配合.
* is must writing..As the item except *,please fill out amply,so we can answer more amply for you,thank you.
1.is 和must都是动词,不能连用…… is 是系动词,后面加ing的动词,或者冠词+名词,must是情态动词,后面只加动词原形.
2.amply只有两个音节,比较级是：amplier,不用more amply
3.句子结构比较松散……书面语略显奇怪.
如果是我翻的是这样：The option with an asterisk (*) is required.In order to provide you with more detailed reply,please also complete the ones without *.Thank you!