麻烦修改一篇英语作文,作为演讲稿用,一分钟到一分半左右的文章Imovedthefilm

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麻烦修改一篇英语作文,作为演讲稿用,一分钟到一分半左右的文章
I moved the film < Chinese partners>.
Every successful person do poineering work history is an epic.
They have a good opinion of oneself,one is,fail to show restraint overseas descendants; one is obsessed withpoetry,casual and elegant bearing romantic knight; one is be careless about one's dress,a woodlouse unknown to the public,is all about extremes,three people be misfits,establish friendship in accidentally,and hit a myth.
In this modern look for positive energy,this film will giveme positive energy transfer full.Wang Yang had told Cheng Dongqing said:"don't be afraid to speak Englishwell,sad people,not you." this seemingly humorouswords gave me great feeling:any time what I can succeedinstead,too care about others,will block your foot steps.
The most loved place is that the United States grannygave Deng Chao any money,he said a sentence,"Youare young,you can go far away from here,she will getstuck here." you are young,you may have a greatachievement,and (most of the United States of Americasmoke your income waitress) will only stay in here all my life.This is a strong sense of self-esteem people want tohear the most in washing dishes in the words,or it can be understood as "great despair to find hope,life will be brilliant!"
Now this generation is not just the so-called intellectualswith the so-called strong self-esteem,whether people have lofty ideals and high aspirations but what can bestunderstand the reality,we are the social impact of theside population to themselves,society everywhere there are loopholes allow us to drill,just sometimes we would rather believe in side population society.Although can temporarily make us young people impulses but this is only temporary,and tomorrow will also this impulse to do,what we can only change but cannot change is now!
Personal feeling is the best word into the East in Qingkou:"jump into the water is not terrible,but can't stay in the water,you will only continue to move forward." It is thecourage to let me move forward,as the new youth.
这是自己写的，有很多语病希望修改，还有篇幅过长，可以删减。

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I was moved by the film < Chinese partners>.Every successful person who does a poineering work in history is an epic.They have a good opinion of themselves, 错太多了,很难改.从新写写,我再给你改.一定!on...