英语翻译上周六是张林的生日.他在家里举行了生日聚会.聚会上他和他的朋友们一起唱歌、做游戏,他还收到了许多生日礼物,那天他非常开心.It was Zhan Lin's birthday last Saturday,he had a birthday party

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英语翻译
上周六是张林的生日.他在家里举行了生日聚会.聚会上他和他的朋友们一起唱歌、做游戏,他还收到了许多生日礼物,那天他非常开心.
It was Zhan Lin's birthday last Saturday,he had a birthday party at home.He and his
friends sang songs,play games,he also has got a lot of birthday presents,that day
he was very happy.
英文是我自己翻译的,大家觉得有没有什么不对的
不好意思,那段翻译我有的打错了,应该是：
It was Zhan Lin's birthday last Saturday,he had a birthday party at home.He and his
friends sang songs,played games together at party,he also has got a lot of birthday presents,that day he was very happy.

Answer 1

第一句话的两个分句是两个独立的句子,应用句号分开,第二句也一样.has got是一般现在时,应改为got,play也没有用过去时.
应该是It was Zhan Lin's birthday last Saturday.He had a birthday party at home.He and his
friends sang songs, and played games. He also got a lot of birthday presents.That day
he was very happy.