英语短文改错(要说原因哦)AsisknowntoallthatthattheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartonourdailylife.Onit,wecannotonlyreadnewsathomeorabroadbutalsogetmuchinformationaspossible.Forinstance,weareo

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英语短文改错(要说原因哦)
As is known to all that that the Internet is playing a more and more important part on our daily life.On it,we can not only read news at home or abroad but also get much information as possible.For instance,we are often send e-mail or make telelphone calls to our families as well as our friends.However,we can go to school on the net,read different kind of books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music,watching sports and play computer games.We can even do shopping without left our ho

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all that that 中的that 改为which定语从句的 原则 在our daily life前加in the daily life 是固定短语表示"在日常生活中"l,at home or abroad 中的or 改为and 表示国内外,kind of改为 kinds ,watching改为watch 表示并列 teach ourselves 改为us teache 后用宾语