请帮我看下这段话有没有用法错误？有的话请指出？我翻译的正确吗？Ididn'tgiveup.andalsowillnotgoawayfromyou.iamwaitingnewsfromyouwithallmyheartandsoul.Eveniflondonbridgeisfalldown.Evenifgrea

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请帮我看下这段话有没有用法错误？有的话请指出？我翻译的正确吗？I didn't give up. and also will not go away from you. i am waiting news from you with all my heart and soul. Even if london bridge is fall down. Even if great walk fall down. Even if everyone on the earth left you. I won't leave you. 我没有放弃，也不会离你而去，我全心全意，等你的消息，就算伦敦大桥垮下来，就算万里长城倒下来，我也不离开。

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I didn't give up. and also will not go away from you. i am waiting news from you with all my heart and soul. Even if london bridge is fall down. Even if great walk fall down. Even if everyone on the earth left you. I won't leave you. 我没有放弃，也不会离你而去， 我全心全意，等你的消息， 就算伦敦大桥垮下来， 就算万里长城倒下来， 我也不离开 第一句的翻译，因为是didn't是过去时，可以翻译成：我没有放弃过。 第三四句犯了基本的语法错误，Even if london bridge is fall down,可以改成Even if london bridge is falling down. 或者Even if london bridge falls down.第四句也是。 第五句你没有翻译成英文，漏掉了。 Even if everyone on the earth left you. 即使全世界的人都已经离开了你。 其他没什么特别的问题。谢谢