假如你是汤姆,请根据以下的提示,用英语给你网友Lisa写一封电子邮件向她介绍你对旅行的看法.开头和结尾已给出。提示:1.旅游是一种非常好的活动,有益健康2.旅游有时很多麻烦,如

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假如你是汤姆,请根据以下的提示,用英语给你网友Lisa写一封电子邮件向她介绍你对
旅行的看法. 开头和结尾已给出。
提示: 1. 旅游是一种非常好的活动, 有益健康  2. 旅游有时很多麻烦,如天气多变,容易生病  3. 旅游有时了解当地天气情况,保管好自己的财物
Dear Lisa,
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Yours
Tom

Answer 1

基础写作
One possible version:
Dear Lisa,
You asked me my idea about traveling. Now I’d like to tell you about it.
In my opinion, traveling is a good activity. It is good for our health. We can enjoy the beautiful scenery. We can also relax ourselves. But sometimes the weather can change and we may get ill. So we should know some information about the weather when traveling. Remember to take good care of our things.
What’s your opinion? Please let me know.

这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。