请帮我读一下这个英文是不是通顺了那里不对的请帮我修改一下写法是不是太中国化Insummer,weoftengoonvacationsIlikespringbestAtanytimeweareinoneormoreenvironmentwhetheritisgoodornot.Inourfa

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请帮我读一下 这个英文 是不是通顺了 那里不对的 请帮我修改一下 写法是不是太中国化
In summer,we often go on vacations
I like spring best
At any time we are in one or more environment whether it is good or not.In our family
we are sounded by the love of our family members
At society there are competition ,stress and some ugly conditions ,but we must to face it because it is the environment we can't change
Life is wonderful because I am able to balance my life

Answer 1

前两句还可以
第三句错误不少 虽然能大概看出是什么意思,语句完全不同 第一个句号之前根本不成句子 后面也有小错误
第四句 At可改成in must后面直接跟动词就好了
这也只是我能看得出来的