帮忙修改一句话~中文翻译成英文~英文我翻译的.感觉老不对.麻烦大侠挑挑错误,指出我的错误,并改正~从她获得奥斯卡最佳女主角,成为历史上第一位黑人奥斯卡影后开始,再对她的家庭成员、

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帮忙修改一句话~
中文翻译成英文~
英文我翻译的.感觉老不对.麻烦大侠挑挑错误,指出我的错误,并改正~
从她获得奥斯卡最佳女主角,成为历史上第一位黑人奥斯卡影后开始,再对她的家庭成员、白人对她的偏见和歧视以及她演艺之路起自选美和模特这三方面展开.
She got the Best Actress of Oscar Award and became the first Africa-American Best Actress ,the author has expanded according to three respects:her family members,she experienced much prejudice and discrimination from white people and the way of her performing arts begins with beauty pageants and model.
中文翻译成英文~

Answer 1

首先有点啰嗦,第一句出现两个best actress,重复了.第二缺少必要连词.the author前要有连词,意思还不错.加油