高手进来帮我检查一下这段英语有没有什么语法不对的地方,Goodmorning,It'sreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunityforainterview.I'mXX,IwasbornonFebruaryX,XXXX.MynativeplaceisXX.In2010IgraduatedfromXXvoca

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高手进来帮我检查一下这段英语有没有什么语法不对的地方,
Good morning,It's really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview.I'mXX,I was born on February X,XXXX .My native place is XX.In 2010 I graduated from XX vocational education schools,my major is XX.My experience is not much,but I will try to learn about working knowledge,serious about this work,diligence and hard work.
大致意思是：
早上好,非常荣幸能有这个机会参加面试.我叫XX,我出生于XXXX年2月X日.我的籍贯是XX.在2010年我毕业于XX职业教育学校,我的专业是XX.我的经验不多,但是我会努力学习知识、严谨的工作为这工作勤奋和努力.

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这一段这么改改会不会好点： Good morning.It is really a great honor to have this interview.My name is xx,I was born on xx Feburary,XXXX at xxxx(出生地）.During 2006 to 2010,I have studied xx(专业) in x...