请修正一下英文部分的错误中文部分：手机已经成为大家生活中不可缺少的沟通工具,对于我来说,手机不仅是用来打电话的,还有这随身听这样重要的功能.而出门在外,用手机听音乐的最大困

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请修正一下英文部分的错误
中文部分：手机已经成为大家生活中不可缺少的沟通工具,对于我来说,手机不仅是用来打电话的,还有这随身听这样重要的功能.而出门在外,用手机听音乐的最大困扰就是耳机线.一方面耳机线经常会于其他东西缠绕,另一方面,在拥挤的地铁上,也很容易被别人拽找.因此我很喜欢用蓝牙耳机,一方面在路上听音乐的时候会感觉非常的自由,另一方面用蓝牙耳机打电话,能够腾出双手,同时做些其他的事情.英文部分：Cellphone now is a popular thing which is everyone has one and brings it everywhere.For me,cellphone is not a call tool but also a music Walkman.When I was outside,I always felt lousy about the headphone cord.Sometimes it would get fouled up in other thing,and sometimes it would be drawn away by other people when I was in the crowd subway or crowd bus.So I’m very like Bluetooth,this one could let me feel free when I was listening music everywhere.And when I was on calling,it could free me hand and allow me do something else when I was on speaking.

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Cellphone now is a popular thing as almost everyone has one and brings it everywhere.For me,cellphone is not only a call tool but also a music Walkman.When I was outside,I always felt lousy about the headphone cord.Sometimes it would get fouled up in other thing,and sometimes it would be drawn away by other people when I was in the crowded subway or on crowded buses .So I like Bluetooth very much ,since it could let me feel free when I was listening to music everywhere.And when I was on calling,it could free my hand and allow me to do something else when I was on the phone .