英语作文Myieol,想请大家看下,按中考的话能拿几分.有什么好的修改建议.MyidelInmyheart.lalwaysthinkmyfartherismyidol.Whenlamconfused,healwaysgivesmegoodadvice,whenlamindangerhewillprotectme.WhenIsick

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英语作文My ieol,想请大家看下,按中考的话能拿几分.有什么好的修改建议.
My idel
In my heart.lalways think my farther is my idol.When l am confused,he always gives me good advice,when l am in danger he will protect me.When I sick,he will take care of me.When l make mistakes,he will not criticism me.When he is angry at me,l konw that l make farther sad.l always try my best to make he happy.My farther is my only idol,forever!
中考是7,8,3制的,7分内容,8分语法,3分提高积累.一共18分

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有多处语法错误和时态错误,建议平时多锻炼多写多看