帮我把这个故事改的口语化一点今天我给大家讲一个故事,这个故事的主人公就是我们十分熟悉的孔融.一天,邻居的阿姨送来了一大筐水晶梨.这梨可诱人了,闻一闻真香,有的晶莹透亮像一颗大

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帮我把这个故事改的口语化一点
今天我给大家讲一个故事,这个故事的主人公就是我们十分熟悉的孔融.
一天,邻居的阿姨送来了一大筐水晶梨.这梨可诱人了,闻一闻真香,有的晶莹透亮像一颗大大的黄宝石.这几兄弟看见了都忍不住流下口水.大哥说我要吃大梨,二哥说不,我要吃大梨.话音刚落,几兄弟就蜂拥而上,挑最大的吃.只有孔融一人静静地站在一旁,等兄弟们都抢完了才慢慢地走上去,随意挑一个最小的吃.这时正在吃梨的哥哥觉得很奇怪就问道：“孔融啊,筐里还有大梨你为什么吃一个最小的呢?”孔融回答道：“老师说过小朋友要懂得谦让.这大梨还是让给哥哥吃吧,我吃一个小的就行了.”
还有一次孔融的哥哥孔堡的朋友张俭因为一件小事得罪了当时势高利大的一位官员就忙跑到孔融家躲难.可正巧当时孔堡不在家.孔融就说：“这事我能做主,你进来吧.”可谁知世上没有不透风的墙,这事不久就穿出去了.官府的人把孔堡和张俭一并抓走,并判了孔堡一个窝藏罪.孔融听说后,心里十分着急.就跑到官府对大人说：“孔融参见大人.大人,大人求求您放了哥哥,张俭是我藏的,哥哥毫不知情这罪名应有我来承担.”哥哥说道：“不不不,大人你别听他胡说,张俭是我的朋友,这罪名应由我来承担.”两兄弟你一句我一句,互不相让.大人也被他们两人珍贵的友谊感动了,就把他们放了.

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Today, I'll tell you a familiar story, whose hero is Kong Jung.
One day, an aunt from his neighborhood sent a large basket of crystal pears.The pears are inviting, with fragrant smell, and looks like some shining brilliantly big yellow precious stones which made his several brothers could not help pourring mouth water. Elder brother said he want to eat the biggest pear while the younger brother want to eat the very one. No sooner did the words be said than a few brothers rush at he biggest pear. However , Kong Jung was the only one stood quietly, after his brothers' grabbing, he went slowly and randomly pick one of the smallest to eat. At this time , the elder brother find it strange and asked: "Jung, there are bigger pear in the basket, and Why do you eat the smallest one?" Kong Jung replied: "The teacher said that children need to know of humility. The big pear should be given to my brother ,while It will be fine for me to have the small one . "
Another time , a friend of Kong Jung's brother Kong bao, offended one of the manager in power at that time for a small thing , so he went Kong Jung for a shelter . It happened not to be home for Kongbao , but Kong.Jung said: "I can decided it , please come in." Who would have thought that there is no windtight wall, and it must be someone make it out . The officials arrested Kong bao and Zhang Jian, and sentenced hime to be criminal for aids a criminal . Having heard that, Kong Jung became very anxious. So he went to the official and said: "Kong Jung , I am happy to see you ,the manager .I beg for you to release my brother, It's me who preciously deposit Zhang Jian , and my elder brother have no knowledge of it." while his Brother said: "No, manager , you shouldn't listen to him, Zhang Jian is my friend, and I'll take this responsibility . " The two brothers argued with each other and refused to give in .The manager also be touched by their precious friendship, so he let out both of them .
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