英语翻译这是5段英文的名人简介,是我小妹写的,虽然很蹩脚,但请大家千万不要见笑啊,希望哪位高手能帮她纠正一下错误,不要用翻译器做啊,巴尔扎克(HonorédeBalzac)Name:HonorédeBalzacPlaceofbirt

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这是5段英文的名人简介,是我小妹写的,虽然很蹩脚,但请大家千万不要见笑啊,希望哪位高手能帮她纠正一下错误,不要用翻译器做啊,
巴尔扎克(Honoré de Balzac)
Name:Honoré de Balzac
Place of birth:France
Birth and death year:1799－1850
Occupation:writer
Accomplishment:In 1829,Honoré de Balzac wrote first story.He wrote in his life time.It’s very famous.The most famous stories is < Eugenie Grandet >and < Le Père Goriot >.
沃尔夫冈•阿玛迪乌斯•莫扎特（W.A.Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart）
Name:W.A.Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart
Place of birth:Austria
Birth and death year:1756-1791
Occupation:musician and composer
Accomplishment:W.A.Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart composed 22 operas,41 symphonies,42 concertos and a requiem,as well as sonatas,chamber music,religion music and songs and other works in his life time.He was one of the most famous history of Europe opera gifted.
文森特•威廉•梵高(Vincent Willem van Gogh)
Name:Vincent Willem van Gogh
Place of birth:Holland
Birth and death year:1853-1890
Occupation:artist
Accomplishment:He painted < Self-portrait> and other well known works.He is very,very poor,but he was one of the most famous Impressionism great master.
冰心（Bing Xin）
Name:Bing Xin
Place of birth:China.
Birth and death year:1900-1999
Occupation:writer
Accomplishment:She wrote many great works in her life time .Such as < Infinite Stars >< The Author's Preface> and .Her works are very popupar in China.A lof of young children like her.And a lof of adult like her,too.
三毛（San Mao）
Name:San Mao(San Mao is her pseudonym.She real name is Chen Ping.)
Place of birth:China
Occupation:writer
Accomplishment:In Sahara,Sanmao wrote .It’s very wonderful.After returning to,she wrote < The long and trying journey goes all over >.And then,she teach students writing.In 1990,she wrote first Chinese script in her last life time.

Answer 1

1.Honoré de Balzac wrote （加his） first story.
2.He also wrote （in his life time.去掉,死了怎么写,后面所有的其他人的描述,这句都要去掉）别用中文直译：生前
3.The most famous stories is（改成are复数） < Eugenie Grandet >and < Le Père Goriot >.
4.He was one of the most famous （history of Europe opera gifted.改成 persons who had the gift of the opera composing of the European history)欧洲历史上有歌剧创作才能的人之一.
5.He is (was)very,very poor,but he was one of the most famous Impressionism great master(masters).凡是one of 后面肯定用复数,才能称为之一啊.great可以不要,master已经表示大师.
6.And a lof of adult（s） like her,too
7.After returning to(Taiwan,没写地名）
8.she teach（taught,过去式） students （加about)writing.
9.In 1990,she wrote (the)first Chinese script in her last life time(the last time of her life)
妹妹写了这么多,应该表扬了,不过要注意检查.还有关于生死年限,我们通常会说,He\She was born in ...and died in...