帮忙改英语错误首先声明,小女初学英语.语法相当差.故错误连篇,请大家莫见怪.TRytodoyourself.doyouown.thenyouwillbefoundifonlyihaven'tgotloveiwon'tbehappysodon'tworryyou'llbewinwipeoutyourmistakes.

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帮忙改英语错误
首先声明,小女初学英语.语法相当差.故错误连篇,请大家莫见怪.
TRy to do yourself .do you own.
then you will be found
if only i haven't got love
i won't be happy
so don't worry
you'll be win
wipe out your mistakes.

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try to do it yourself.do your own
then you will be found 如果说你会被发现就没写错,但是说你会发现..就应该说 then you will find
if I haven't got love
I won't be happy/ I will be unhappy
so don't worry
you'll win
wipe your mistakes
即：
try to do it yourself.do your own
then you will find
if I haven't got love
I won't be happy/ I will be unhappy
so don't worry
you'll win
wipe your mistakes