英语流利的,无语法错误的同志来帮个忙!感激不尽!想写一篇极其优秀的英文作文关于环保的,要扣点1.总写现在环境状况2.周围有那些具体的破坏环境行为3.有哪些看法,建议1-2点(最好不要写那

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英语流利的,无语法错误的同志来帮个忙!感激不尽!
想写一篇极其优秀的英文作文
关于环保的,要扣点
1.总写现在环境状况
2.周围有那些具体的破坏环境行为
3.有哪些看法,建议1-2点
(最好不要写那种专用名词太多的那种记叙文体,最好是高中生能写的)
要思想深刻,眼光独到
100-200字就OK了
希望在一天内得到答复
这是我的一些构思,可能不是太完整.写的不好别笑我哈~(希望得到高人的指教并改进~感激不尽)
希望写的不要与我的思维偏离太远
As technology advances,our access to information is becoming more and more.However,the disadvantages it has brought is getting more and more almost at the same time.For instance,the polLution of environment has become one of the most serious problem that people never stop paying attention to.So nowadays,the most important thing is to deal with this problem...(后面就没话说了)
写得太烂..实在不好意思..希望高人能大幅度修改并且帮我写完..
感激不尽!

Answer 1

Our planet is in trouble!Almost every day we seem to hear of yet another problem affecting the environment - and what a list of problems!- pollution,acid rain,climate change,the destruction of rainforests and other wild habitats,the decline and extinction of thousands of species of animals and plants.and so on.
Nowadays,most of us know that these threats exist and that humans have caused them.Many of us are very worried about the future of our planet and unless we can find a way of solving the problems we have made then the environment will suffer even more.
It all sounds so depressing - but we certainly mustn't despair!Every one of us,whatever age we are can do something to help slow down and reverse some of the damage.We cannot leave the problem-solving entirely to the experts - we all have a responsibility for our environment.We must learn to live in a sustainable way i.e.learn to use our natural resources which include air,freshwater,forests,wildlife,farmland and seas without damaging them.As populations expand and lifestyles change,we must keep the world in a good condition so that future generations will have the same natural resources that we have.