请大家帮我修改一下我的英文小故事（CCZC的校友请勿抄袭）大家可以从语法、礼貌用语、或这添加、更换更好Goodafternoon,everyone,MynameisFanRuiyuan,IaminClass8Grade8.It'smygreathonortobehere.I

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请大家帮我修改一下我的英文小故事（CCZC的校友请勿抄袭）
大家可以从语法、礼貌用语、或这添加、更换更好
Good afternoon,everyone ,My name is Fan Ruiyuan,I am in Class 8 Grade 8 .It's my great honor to be here.I like reading books in my free time.I also like English very much.Today I’ll tell an English story for you.The name of the story is 《 The poor man and The rich man》.
There is a poor man.He has an orange tree.On the tree there are many fine oranges.One of them is very,very big.It is as big as a football.Nobody sees so big an orange.The poor man is very pleased.He takes it to the king.The king is so pleased that he gives the man a lot of money for it.
When a rich man hears of it,he says to himself,“It’s only an orange.Why does the king give so much money for it?I’ll take my gold cup to the king.He’ll give me more money.”
The next day when the king receives the gold cup,he says to the rich man,“What a beautiful cup!I’ll show you something wonderful.Please take this great orange.”
That’s all.Hope you can support me .Thank you very much!
对照译文：
大家下午好,我的名字加XXX,我在X（X）班,很荣幸能站在这里.业余时间我喜欢读书,我也非常喜欢英语,今天我要讲一个英语故事给你们.故事的名字是《穷人和富人》
有一个穷人,他有一颗橘子树,树上有许多非常好的橘子,其中有一个非常非常的大,差不多和足球一样大,从来没有人见过如此大的一个橘子,穷人非常的高兴.就把它带给了国王,国王非常高兴,就给了他很多的钱
有一个富人听说了这件事,心里想,“就只有一个橘子,为什么国王给他那么多钱,如果我把我的金杯给国王,他会给我更多的钱.
第二天,当国王收到这个金杯的时候,就对这个富人说,“多么漂亮的金杯,我要给你看一件好东西,请把这个大橘子拿走吧.
我的故事讲完了,希望你们能支持我

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