假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（ __ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

              2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything

special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better

biscuits in the world so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me

some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I

thought the biscuits were really well . My only mistake was that I dropped

some on the floor after I was packing them up.

      At a party my coach with a biscuit in his mouth asked surprisingly

who made them and joked “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

Answer 1

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Key; My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for ...