假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As the saying goes，chance favored the prepared mind．I learned this from one of my experience．
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school．Because of this，I decided to give up play volleyball．Luckily，my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure．After that，I practiced playing volleyball on every day．When another tryout arrived，I was full prepared and tried my best．As a result，I was selected and became an important player on our school team．
From this，I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared．

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As the saying goes，chance favored the prepared mind．I learned this from one of my experience．I was not chosen as∧member of the volleyball team of our school．Because of this，I decided to give up ...