求各位英语大神们看看此文有无语法错误,如有请指出,感激不尽.SpringFestivalTheSpringFestivalisoneoftheimportantfestivalsofChinese.BeforetheSpringFestival,peoplealwaysgotothemarkettobuysomethingwhattheyn

Question

求各位英语大神们看看此文有无语法错误,如有请指出,感激不尽.
Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is one of the important festivals of Chinese.Before the Spring
Festival,people always go to the market to buy something what they need.During
the Spring Festival,apples,oranges,and something were soon sold out.People are always put on the new clothes in the Spring Festival.The children are very
happy.Because they can get the sweet candies,some delicious food,wear the new clothes and get the red envelopes.In the evening,fireworks light up the sky.And I
have a happy Spring Festival,too.My family go to the restaurant,and have a big dinner.For the mean time,we say good hope to each other.For example,keep in
good health,thy your best in a new year,and never say never etc.And I received some red envelopes from elders.After dinner,we sing songs,and watch the fireworks.

Answer 1

people always go to the market to buy something what they need
（what改为“that”）
apples,oranges,and something were soon sold out.People are always put on the new clothes in the Spring Festival.
（something 改为 any other fruit ; were 改为will be; soon 移到sold out 后；删去are ）
Because they can get the sweet candies(Because 改为小写)
My family go to the restaurant,and have a big dinner.（go 改为went;have 改为had ）
we say good hope to each other(最好改为 we sent our the best wish to each other )
we sing songs,and watch the fireworks(sing 改为 sang ;watch 改为 watched )
这些是我的意见,有错请多多谅解.