假设你叫李华是一名高中生.最近你在某国外的图书网站购买了一本图书遇到了一些问题.为此你决定向该公司的服务部进行投诉.主要内容包括：1.图书比预计晚到10天2.图书出现

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假设你叫李华 是一名高中生.最近 你在某国外的图书网站购买了一本图书 遇到了一些问题.为此 你决定向该公司的服务部进行投诉.主要内容包括：
1.图书比预计晚到10天

2.图书出现了缺页现象

3.希望问题尽快得到解决

注意：

1.词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数。

Dear Sir and Madam

My name is Li Hua. I am a student of a high school in China.__________________

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__________________________________________________________________Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

My name is Li Hua. I am a student of a high school in China. I’ve recently bought a book from your website. However some problems have arisen which makes me upset. I am writing to complain about them.

First of all the book I ordered reached me ten days later than expected which brought me lots of inconvenience. Worse still when I looked through it I found that a few pages are missing which makes me rather disappointed. I know you are a famous book-selling website but my experience shows that your service needs improvement. I would appreciate it if you can send me another book as soon as possible.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

分 析：
这是一篇提纲类作文。假设你叫李华 是一名高中生.最近 你在某国外的图书网站购买了一本图书 遇到了一些问题.为此 你决定向该公司的服务部进行投诉.主要内容包括： 1.图书比预计晚到10天 2.图书出现了缺页现象 3.希望问题尽快得到解决。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】However some problems have arisen which makes me upset.这里含有一个定语从句。First of all the book I ordered reached me ten days later than expected which brought me lots of inconvenience.这里含有一个定语从句。I know you are a famous book-selling website but my experience shows that your service needs improvement. 这里含有一个宾语从句。

考点：
提纲类书面表达