求英语改错.写了一封电邮回信给FB上的新朋友的..可惜拿不准,求纠错.无论语法错误还是不符合英语表达习惯的错误.都可以纠正.helloCatherineMynameislunanditsmyhonourtoreceiveyourletter.Igotyour

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求英语改错.
写了一封电邮回信给FB上的新朋友的..可惜拿不准,求纠错.无论语法错误还是不符合英语表达习惯的错误.都可以纠正.
hello Catherine
My name is lun and its my honour to receive your letter.I got your email from facebok.Unfortunately i cant use the facebook.com any more since i came back to my country.
well,the first thing i wanna tell you is i come from Wuhan China and I have been in the USA half month ago.I signed up a facebok during those days.So thats why you were able to get my contact information online.I spent about a month in philadelphia .I studied in a local university as a visitor and a exchange student and also went to NYC and DC .Its really a good memory for me.
looking forward your reply and one more thing is you could contact me through this email XXXXXXX.

Answer 1

1.名字首字母尽量大写：Lun.除非特别熟.
2.facebook而不是facebok.
3.looking forward to your reply.习惯用法.
4.另外我觉得你英语中的中文的味道还是很重,短句多,总是看见你用I.
5.an exchange不是a exchange
Hi Catherine,
How're you doing?
My name's Lun and it's my honor to receive your letter via your email from Facebook.Unfortunately the facebook can't be accessed after I came back to China.
Well,the very first thing I'd like to tell is that I come from Wuhan,China and I've been in USA half month ago,During those days,I singed up a facebook and that's also why you were able to get my contact online.Sutied in local university as a vsitor and an exchange student,spent about a month in philadelphia,also went go NYC and DC,all these are really good memories for me.
Looking forward to hearing from you and one more thing:you can conact me by this email
另外你是要泡洋妞吗?哈哈,那祝福啦!