下面的英语句子我写的对吗?如果不正确烦请指正,Ineedtotaketheofficialchoptocustomsforgetthe“名录卡”.SocouldyoubringittogetherwhenyouonabusinesstriptoShanghainexttime,ifpossible

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下面的英语句子我写的对吗?如果不正确烦请指正,
I need to take the official chop to customs for get the “名录卡”.So could you bring it together when you on a business trip to Shanghai next time,if possible

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I need to take the official chop to customs to get “名录卡”.
So,could you,if possible,bring it together when you on a business trip to Shanghai next time?
从字面上看,你这封信里面想找别人要东西,名录卡前面省略冠词比较通.
if possible放在中间显得语气比较委婉