这段英语写的有语病吗?IamLucy,aseniorstudentmajoringincommunicationfromPekingUniversity.Iamwritingheretorecommendmyselfasacandidateforthejob.IamconfidentthatIamqualifiedforthefollowingreasons.Firstandforemos

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这段英语写的有语病吗?
I am Lucy,a senior student majoring in communication from Peking University.I am writing here to recommend myself as a candidate for the job.
I am confident that I am qualified for the following reasons.First and foremost,I ascribe my competency and confidence to my proficiency accumulated for years.What is more,I can speak three kinds of languages including English,French,Japanese,which serves as my advantages for assuming that position.For further information,please refer my attached resume.
Thank you for your invaluable consideration and time.I would be grateful if you could arrange an interview at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to your reply.

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accumulated over the yearsWhat is more 换成 in additionI can speak three kinds of languages 最后改成: I'm fluent in three languageswhich serves as my advantages for assuming that position 最后改成 whi...