图示作文根据下面图画用英语写一篇日记，描述你6月4日星期三下午放学回家路上发生的事情．注意：1．日记必须包括所有图画内容，可以适当增加细节；使日记连贯．2．你是

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根据下面图画用英语写一篇日记，描述你6月4日星期三下午放学回家路上发生的事情．

注意：

1．日记必须包括所有图画内容，可以适当增加细节；使日记连贯．

2．你是画中的女学生：．

3．词数：100词左右．

Answer 1

　　学生：习作：

　　May 4th Thursday Rainy

　　This afternoon, when I walked out from(X₁) the school, the weather changed. Dark clouds were coming. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying to(X₂) home, ∧(X₃). I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned round and found it was Lan Mei. She had a(X₄) umbrella with her and asked me to use it with her. She walked all the way with me to my home.

　　剖析：1．从……走出、取出、拿出，应用介词of，即“walk out of…”．

　　2．副词home、here、there前一般不用介词，所以此处to应去掉．

　　3．home后少一个内容要点holding my bag on my head，作was hurrying home的伴随状态．

　　4．umbrella是以元音音素开头的，所以a应改为an．

　　总评：本文行文流畅，语言简练，但不足之处是少了一个要点holding my bag on my head．