正老师,又来问您问题了.嘿嘿.DearDom,Howiseverythinggoing?Severaldaysago,I’vesentyouanemailtoaskabouttheMFAprogramme,andIfeelanxiouswhetheryoucannotreceiveupmessagebecausemailingboxsystemortheelectricne

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正老师,又来问您问题了.嘿嘿.
Dear Dom,

How is everything going?

Several days ago, I’vesent you an email to ask about the MFA programme, and I feel anxious whether you cannot receive up message because mailing box system or the electric network reason.

I am writing to tell youthat I’ve sent an email to the course leaderto express how eager I am to join the programme. In the former email I have asked three questions and I still wonder about two of them.
1, How many students for MFA willyou recruit?
2, I want to know the tuition fee of the second year of the MFA, is it the same as that of the first year?

I am very appreciated it if you canhelp me, and looking forward to hearing from you soon.

All best,

Joanna
老师您看这封邮件我写的什么地方有问题.

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没大问题
第三行I’ve sent 改为I sent
第四行cannot改为can
because改为because of
第六行have asked 改为asked