托福作文独立写作中间段的论据如果想写个人经历,应该怎样写才算高分?又没有哪位教过托福的老师知道啊

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托福作文独立写作中间段的论据如果想写个人经历,应该怎样写才算高分?又没有哪位教过托福的老师知道啊

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注意个人经历内容写到精确具体, 语言做到准确地道形象. 比如:
论点: English does not seem to be spoken by Americans in the same way that it was presented in my textbooks.
个人经历: Take myself for example, the first time I asked an American a question, I got a strange response. The man who answered my question said something sounded like “dunno”. I was sure that I had never studied this expression in my textbooks, and I could not find anything like this in dictionary. Eventually, I was surprised to learn later from a friend that this was nothing more than a shorten version of “I do not know”.具体怎么写还是请教老师吧,我也是学生,我实在TPO小站哪里学的,我才考完6月9号的,我觉得考得还不错,老师讲的对我很受用呀