帮我修改自己写的英文自我介绍,要求改完后文字清丽,没有语法问题Hello,everybody.MynameisWendyReeves.Iamnewhere,andIwillappreciateyourhelp!I’mveryhappytotobeyourclassmate.Ithinkwecanbegoodfriends.Ple

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帮我修改自己写的英文自我介绍,要求改完后文字清丽,没有语法问题
Hello,everybody.My name is Wendy Reeves.I am new here,and I will appreciate your help!I’m very happy to to be your classmate.I think we can be good friends.
Please allow me to introduce myself here.I graduated from XIMAJINRUN elementary school.I was an appearance of quiet,but with out losing a strong girl inside.My favorite flower is Pollia,because Chinese Poetry:the man,Fang Pollia japonica.I like his character,And I also want to be like him.I am a calm,rational person.My hobby is widespread,likes to read a book.I hope I can read the text together,with experience in meaningful.I like Lin Whei-yin very much,although she is a woman,but full of wit,amiable and easy of approach,I hope he is such a clever girl
Though I am quiet,but like to like-minded friends,learn together.My favorite subject is English,.This is a charming language.I hope that they will be able to study abroad,become a well-informed woman.
I am glad to meet all of you and I hope we will become good friends.

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I will very appreciate that you may give some help to me (for my study) in the later days.
Please allow me to introduce myself here.这句我觉得可以删掉,要么放在 第一段第一句后面.
likes to read a book -->Something like reading,taking a walk and so on.
although she is a woman,but full of wit,-->although引导的从句不能与but,however连用,但可与yet,still连用.这个句子可以改成：even though she is a woman ,but she is ful of wit..
Though I am quiet,but like to like-minded friends,learn together...这个句子.
I hope that they will be able to study abroad --> they
个人意见,仅供参考,不能保证百分百正确哦~