写了两句英文诗,ilovesittingonthesteps,watchingthe"dolarshop"becauseihaveyousitbesidemeilovesmilingbecauseyouwillsmilebacktomeiloveyou.(请补充这一句)要有文采,并把上面的两句如果有语法错误或

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写了两句英文诗,
i love sitting on the steps ,watching the "dolar shop"
because i have you sit beside me
i love smiling
because you will smile back to me
i love you
.(请补充这一句)
要有文采,并把上面的两句如果有语法错误或者有更好意思的,来切磋切磋
DOLAR SHOP 是我 们之前看过的一个店名,他认为那个是个错误的单词

Answer 1

i love sitting on the steps ,watching the "dolar shop"(dollar store?一元店)
because i have you sit(sitting) beside me
i love smiling
because you will(always总会) smile back to me
i love you
maybe you do too.(可能你也会）