很多句子不地道呢hereitis:Forme,torchrelaymustbethemostattractivethingoftheBeijing2008OlympicGames.TheOlympicflamewillarriveinatleast20countries,about100cities,lastingabout130daysanddeliveringatotalmileagea

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很多句子不地道呢
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For me,torch relay must be the most attractive thing of the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.The Olympic flame will arrive in at least 20 countries ,about 100 cities,lasting about 130 days and delivering a total mileage about 137,000 kilometers,delivering a total mileage about 137,000 kilometers.As reported,this totch relay will be the most popular and the longeat in the history of Olympic.
we know that the slogan of the relay is "Light the Passion Share the Dream".The slogan is highly expressive of the theme and distinctive in sentence structure."Light the passion" captures the spirit of Olympic Torch Relay and is inspiring."Share the Dream" falls within Olympic language terminology and correlates with the staging concepts of the Beijing Olympic Games and its "One World One Dream" slogan.The slogan is simple,meaningful and easy to remember.By the way,the flame will get to the top of land apogee:Mount Everest.All the things above will make the totch relay of 2008 Olympic games more fantastic.
Now,let’s imagine the opening ceremony of the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games,the Olympic Flame enter the national stadium.It went through deserts and oasis,bridges and oceans,sunshine beam and rain drops,war zones and peaceful cities,it crossed our inner worlds of hearts,even our dreams-ultimately,it will light the Olympic Torch in main stadium,while enkindle the passion of Beijing,ignite the enthusiasm of China,it will let the whole world share the Olympic dream at that moment..
oH!SOS!thank you so much!

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大虾能把单词打错的全改过来吗?本想给你翻译的但出于以下理由我想有必要等你改后再翻
1.悬赏分太少
2.内容太多
3.单词拼写错误太频繁
4.语法错误太多
不过单词量还挺大请以后记单词注意方法