（初三,英语月考作文）书面表达,请求分析得分原因（请说详细点）,作文满分10分,我只得5分,为什么啊现在,低碳生活已成为生活潮流,作为一名中学生请说说你的低碳行动.提示（1）每天走路

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（初三,英语月考作文）书面表达,请求分析得分原因（请说详细点）,作文满分10分,我只得5分,为什么啊
现在,低碳生活已成为生活潮流,作为一名中学生请说说你的低碳行动.
提示（1）每天走路去学校
（2）随手关灯
（3）充分利用水资源,随手关水龙头等
要求：要有自己看法,可以适当发挥

我的作文 My Low-carbon Life
protecting environment has been a more and more important part in our life. As a student, i often get to school by foot .I still remember to turn off the light, TV. When I leave the room. Not only do I turn off the tap when I needn't to use water , but also I don't use any plastic bags.Making full use of paper for me is necessary . So if we notice everything little in our lives, the Low-Carbon life will be easier and easier.

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没有开头和结尾,要三段式啊
明白?