请求帮忙英语造句用computer-assisted,interpret,submit,stretch,symptom,feelanaversionto,communicate造句,顺便看看本人的句子有无语法错误.Mostpeopleinterpretthecomputer-assistedlifeasanewstyleofliving.Receivingas

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请求帮忙英语造句
用computer-assisted,interpret ,submit ,stretch,symptom ,feel an
aversion to,communicate造句,顺便看看本人的句子有无语法错误.
Most people interpret the computer-assisted life as a new style of living.Receiving assignments,searching information and submitting exercises on Internet are more efficient and convenient.But I think working on Internet at a stretch may cause you the symptom of feeling an aversion to direct communication and that is harmful to you.

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楼主有才.只建议把最后的那个2个
1) that is harmful to you,改成
...communication,which is harmful to you.甚至which is harmful 就可以了.
2) 不要用But起句,换成 However,I think.