请帮我看一下这样一封外贸开发信有什么不妥的地方?应该用怎样的关键词在谷歌上搜索客户Dearmanager,WeareaprofessionalchemicalmanufacturerinthesouthofChina.Hopewehavethehonortobeyoursupplier.Ourpr

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请帮我看一下这样一封外贸开发信 有什么不妥的地方?应该用怎样的关键词在谷歌上搜索客户
Dear manager,
We are a professional chemical manufacturer in the south of China.
Hope we have the honor to be your supplier.
Our products are mainly as below:
-- Titanium Dioxide Anatase /Rutile Typ-- Zinc Oxide
-- Carbon Black
-- PVC Resin SG5
-- Dioctyl Phthalate (DOP)
-- Chlorinated Polyethylene (CPE)
-- Gum Rosin
Since we are manufacturer,our price is fair and favorable and our products are excellent.We hope to establish a long term business relationship of mutual benefit with you.Samples are available for your testing the quality.
Your early reply will be appreciated and your inquiry will be warmly welcomed.
Best Regards,
Lucy

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