求大神帮我改一下英语作文.With the development of economy,t求大神帮我改一下英语作文.With the development of economy,the environmental pollution problem is serious increasingly .Nevertheless air and water pollution affect everyo

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求大神帮我改一下英语作文.With the development of economy,t
求大神帮我改一下英语作文.With the development of economy,the environmental pollution problem is serious increasingly .Nevertheless air and water pollution affect everyone.In order that we can have a better life.Cities to survive,businesses to make a profit,we must take action.firstly,environmental pollution is a long-term problem.Before the improvement of the environment,we should change our concept of environmental protection.To do these things,teachers and students have to discuss and disseminate the importance of protecting the environment .secondly,city planners take environmental problems into consideration.Only have good environment,the development of the economy is better.thirdly,factories should reduce pollution.The factory is the most main cause environmental pollution.As for thoes pollutions,we must limit the factory emission pollution.In order to have a better future,for the sake of our health,for the sake of what we see in the morning the sun rather than the haze.Starts from me,and protects the environment.

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serious increasingly改为 increasingly serious
Nevertheless改为 because
In order that we can have a better life.Cities to survive,businesses to make a profit,we must take action.改为In order to have a better life ,beautiful cities to live,good businesses to make a profit,we must take action.
Only have good environment
改为 Only with good environment
The factory is the most main cause environmental pollution.改为 pollutants from factories are the main cause of environment pollution
As for thoes pollutions改为 to do with pollution 解决污染问题
we must limit the factory emission pollution
改为we must set a limit to the factory pollutants emission
for the sake of what改为for the sake of that
Starts from me,and protects the environment.改为let's do it right now,starting from our own.